The Only Love Poem I Can Write
O Sea,
Our summer fling was much to brief
And spring is months away, O Sea,
O Pacific, O Mother of Fishes
The morning sun
Paints gold on your leg
O Sea
At night the city
Lights are your jewels
On the train
I pass by you
Lean my head against
The window, close my eyes
Hold my breath, O Sea
In my mind
I'm a mermaid in your cold embrace
(O Pacific, O Mother of Fishes)
Free and sleek I swim
Further into your deep,
dark
Critiques
Copyright © 2003 Andrea Roceal James
Name: Jose RiveraFranqui
Email: kig1984@yahoo.com
Insight:
Please keep obsessing o'er the ocean. It makes you write beautiful poetry ^_^